小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My good friend named Ping,She was a beautiful girl with long hair,clear eyes.I have making friends with her for twenty-three years.We come from the same place. She was my classmate from primary school to middle school,We was separated until we went to high school! Nobody can instead of her that who given me so much memories and happiness in my childhood. I knew her when I went to the school the first day, She was assigned to be our minitor because she studied very hard and very smart!