小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

My good friend named Ping,She was a beautiful girl with long hair,clear eyes.I have making friends with her for twenty-three years.We come from the same place. She was my classmate from primary school to middle school,We was separated until we went to high school! Nobody can instead of her that who given me so much memories and happiness in my childhood.I can not remember every thing that happened between us.But I can not forgot the day I saw her on the first time! When I was seven years old my father taken me to the primary school, I did not like to school due to my sister told me I would lose my freedom, I cried all the way.Suddently, I saw a girl towards to me with a smile face.She take me hands and said she would make friend with me.