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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8974
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分79.5分
评语:

单词拼写很棒,可考虑增加学术词汇的使用量;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

These days,it is a fact that many people like judging a person by his appearance.However I think it is extremely wrong.Today i will tell you what i think about it. First,as economy developing and life is better, many people look like beautiful,while they may lack of knowledge.If we arrange for them in important position,they will abuse their power and do harm to people. For example,a school employed a woman teacher.A girl who is remarkably beautiful was employed .However,a year later,students in her class scored low marks and her class was the last one.Then the hand master talked with her,she actually said:"Sorry Mr, I know little about teaching." What a joke!The employed teacher who is beautiful but she knows little about teaching,she doesn't help students anything. Second,some people are smart but they look like ugly,if we only concentrate on their looks,their capacities will be buried and they can not contribute to society. Now there are so many people who have ever been looked upon succeed finally.So a person who is clever is better than a person who is only beautiful in look.We should judge a person by both look and heart.

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