小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

My good friend named Ping,She was a beautiful girl with long hair,clear eyes.I have making friends with her for twenty-three years.We come from the same place. She was my classmate from primary school to middle school,We was separated until we went to high school! Nobody can instead of her that who given me so much memories and happiness in my childhood.I can not remember every thing that happened between us.But I can not forgot the day I saw her on the first time! When I was seven years old my father taken me to the primary school, I cried all the way.I did not like to go to school because my sister told me I would lose freedom,Suddently,I saw a girl with a smile face coming to me.And she asked me why I was so sadly,She took me hands and said she would make friend with me.