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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8972
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分78.5分
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拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

Appearance is one charateristic of person and everyone trend to become beautiful.In sometimes,we judge a man by his appearance.However,we often ignore some importance qualities of people,such as humble, honest and faith.It just like that if a man has a beautiful appearance, he also has every good qualities. Indeed,beauty can bring us a sense of pleasure and we usually trend to communicate with a man who have a good appearance,but we do not judge a man by his appearance.For example,Mayun has an ordinary appearance,however,he struggle and work hard for his career many years.Now He posses a great variety of property and nobody can say he is a useless man just depend on his appearance. In our life, there are some significance qualities more than beauty.From my view,we need understand a man through his all kinds of aspects instead of at a glimpse.

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