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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8972
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分78.5分
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

Appearance is one charateristic of person and everyone trend to become beautiful.In sometimes,we judge a man by his appearance.However,we often ignore some importance qualities of people,such as humble, honest and faith.It just like that if a man has a beautiful appearance, he also has every good qualities. Indeed,beauty can bring us a sense of pleasure and we usually trend to communicate with a man who have a good appearance,but we do not judge a man by his appearance.For example,Mayun has an ordinary appearance,however,he struggle and work hard for his career with decade years.Now He posses a great variety of property and nobody can say he is an useless man just depend on his appearance. In our life, there are some significance qualities more than beauty.From my view,we need understand a man through his all kinds of aspects instead of at a glimpse.

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