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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36932
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
用户的作文(系统评分42.5分
评语:

简单句偏多,应增加从句使用;请注意词汇表达的多样性及拼写错误,尤其加强学术词汇的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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I have a good friend. Her name is Susan.She comes from America. Now we are in the same class within No.8 Middle school. We often go to school and go home toghter,just like sisters.She likes English very much and actually she is good at it. So, If I have a question of English, I will turn to her for help. She is very helpful. She also does well in singing and dancing. Everytime there is a party,she will give us a wonderful show. This is my good friend, kind,excent and helpful

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