内容:本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品,非常感兴趣,请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作,希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
【高频词句】
1.price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2.establish business relationship建立贸易关系
请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度;熟练的使用了从句和复杂句;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
He grew up and learned tennis in the attitude of playing jokes by his father tennis is not a hobby for him, but to beat his father's goal. In the game and his teammates, opponents, the dragon gradually see a more meaningful for the goal of the national competition, get rid of the pressure to go beyond his father, in the process of pursuing dream champion belongs to his tennis career