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Oh,dear. Welcome to our city, I am glad to hear you want to see me in the CHONG QIN. If you come to CHONGQIN in summer ,I want to tell you ,there is very cool ,so you must have to be preparing for you. But this is only part of, if you come here ,I will taking you CIQIKOU there is good place,have so much foods and plays, Can you eat CHOUDOUFU? it's very delicious,I think.Then we going to JIEFANGBEI there has so many peoples of couse,most of rich people ,Finally,is very importance, if you come to there,you not eat HUOGUO,you must disappointment,because it is specialty in CHONGQING. OK, more do not say,waiting for you coming.
