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字数：300 满分：100分
作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，可是单词拼写做的不错；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
as far as i am concered,a college student should be saving on every side in our life. firstly,as a college student we do not have enough money.because of that,we must be saving so that we can buy more books about our study which can improve our ability.it is more unuseful for us to buy the little things which is bad for us study.secondly,saving is our traditional virtue.we are college student should obey it and inherit it so that our traditional virtue could not disappear. in a conclusion,saving is a good thing for every body.
