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Many children and their parents have lots of difference opinions.I have the generation gap with my parents,too. I often argue with my parents because of some little problems.For example,I usually want to eat some junk food because they taste sweet.But my parents always disagree with me. They think that it's unhealthy for me.Besides,my mother often buy me many new clothes. However,they look very old and not pretty. To work out the generation gap,I think I need to communicate with my parents.Then I should find the way to solve these problems.Last,I need to make my parents feel happy. I think I can work the generation gap out.