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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦128:代沟

发布时间:2015-03-31 18:02浏览次数:422[网页划词已开启]
要求:
代沟(generation gap) 已成为当今一个较严重的社会问题。你与你的父母有代沟吗?你认为应如何处理这类问题?请以 “The Generation Gap between My Parents and Me” 为题写一篇短文。内容包括:
1.你与你父母的代沟是什么。
2.你的感受如何。
3.你打算如何解决这个问题。
要求:1.不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现真实的姓名和校名。
2. 语句连贯,80个词左右。
3. 作文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。请将作文写在答题卡的相应位置上。

The Generation Gap between My Parents and Me

Nowadays the generation gap has become a serious social problem.
用户的作文(系统评分68.5分
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作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升,学术词汇使用过少;正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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Many children and their parents have lots of difference opinions.I have the generation gap with my parents,too. I often argue with my parents because of some little problems.For example,I usually want to eat some junk food because they taste sweet.But my parents always disagree with me. They think that it's unhealthy for me.Besides,my mother often buy me many new clothes. However,they look very old and not pretty. To work out the generation gap,I think I need to communicate with my parents.Then I should find the way to solve these problems.Last,I need to make my parents feel happy. I think I can work the generation gap out.

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