作者能较熟练地使用丰富的词汇,但请加强单词拼写的检查;句法知识较好,但需加强句式变化;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
How Should Parent Help Children to Bt Inpendent? Nowadays,with the ecnomic develop very fast,people's life are better than before in daily life.However,anything has advantege and disdvantege.parents was so concren about their children that deal with anything for their children's life or study.It will bring most problems,for example,children too depend on their parents to then can't formal arrange life or study problem,and so on..... Io order to children to be independent by themselve,parents should put out their hands.As far as I'm concern,parent should less help as lest as possible