2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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when we talk about hometown,I think HeYuan is a beautiful city in china and i think my foreign friend will plessure to visit it. HeYuan is one of beautiful city.it is famous of its eviration, wanlvhu is the best in hehuan which the water is clean as a mirror.heyuan is origin of kejiaren and have many trudition food be famous all over the world.these are very friendly and warm to deal with peaple.so i think my foreign friend will like it even thought live in here. I will happy with my foreign friend in heyuan and there will be fansitic my friend.