2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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shenzhen is a beautiful city. I came here since i graduated from school. Now i work here eight year's.I love this city. This is young city ;it has many chance or challenge. This is a city that is filled with pardon. Meanwhile, there are many free fee park .for example, shijiezhichuang, lianghuashang park,jinxiu park, fenghuang hill and beautiful sea.