题目 Should parents send their kids to art classes?
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1.对这种做法有人表示支持丰富从句的使用,文章会更出色;作者词汇量积累较好,但学术词汇的积累仍需加强,还要避免有拼写错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
A lot of people attach great importance to enroll their children for varous of art training classes and courses,thinking that it could help their children more competitive than others throught the educational life.However,whether parents should do that or not,the answers vary person to person. Some people suport,naturely,do exist.They believe that in addition to do well in school work,extracurricular-learning also should be formed and valued. Furthermore,by participating in those art training classes can not only improve individual quality,but also forst the ability to appreciate beauty. Nevertheless,people who holds the oppsite opinion, believes that attening to art classes particularly those course are not well match with children's interest,can be badly damage their learning desire, which would lead to a consequence of lower efficience. For me, I strongly assume that both the conbination will be perfect.Teenagers should take serious to their school work and at the same time,keep frequent communication with their parents to chooose the interesting art classes.
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