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文 If have foreign friends come to chongqing, I will take him to visit ciqikou. First reason is that it's architecture has a long history and very distinctive, because ciqikou is known for thousand ancient town, I will let him know the broad and profound Chinese architectural culture. Then I'll introduce him to a specialty of ciqikou, such as the famous chenmahua, mihuatang of jiangjin, it is very delicious. I believe he will have a great interest of china food culture after experenced those things. In the end, I will take him to get to know the local people real life, understand the folk customs and rich traditional Chinese culture, let him know that we through their hard work to have today relatively good life. I will send a message to him, we have five thousand years history and culture，and I'm proud of it.
