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2009年12月英语六级作文真题:送孩子参加艺术班

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:33浏览次数:2057
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题目 Should parents send their kids to art classes?

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1.对这种做法有人表示支持
2.有人并不赞成
3.我认为…
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A lot of people attach great importance to enroll their children for various of art training classes and courses,thinking that it could help their children more competitive than others thorough the educational life.However,whether parents should do that or not,the answers vary from person to person. Some people support,naturaly,do exist.They believe that in addition to do well in school work,extracurricular-learning also should be formed and valued. Furthermore,by participating in those art training classes can not only improve individual quality,but also foster the ability to appreciate the beauty. Nevertheless,people who holds the oppsite opinion, believes that attending to art classes particularly those course are not well match with children's interest,can be badly damage their learning desire, which would lead to a consequence of lower efficience. For me, I strongly assume that both the combination will be perfect.Teenagers should take their school work seriously and at the same time,keep frequent communication with their parents to choose the interesting art classes.

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