2009年12月英语六级作文真题:送孩子参加艺术班

文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但学术词汇表达还需要很大提升；句式灵活多变，再加强从句的使用会更棒；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

A lot of people attach great importance to enroll their children for various of art training classes and courses,thinking that it could help their children more competitive than others thorough the educational life.However,whether parents should do that or not,the answers vary from person to person. Some people support,naturally,do exist.They believe that in addition to do well in school work,extracurricular-learning also should be formed and valued. Furthermore,by participating in those art training classes can not only improve individual quality，but also foster the ability to appreciate the beauty. Nevertheless,people who holds the oppsite opinion, believes that attending to art classes particularly those course are not well match with children's interest,can be badly damage their learning desire, which would lead to a consequence of lower efficiency. For me, I strongly assume that both the combination will be perfect.Teenagers should take their school work seriously and at the same time,keep frequent communication with their parents to choose the interesting art classes.