题目 Should parents send their kids to art classes?
要求
1.对这种做法有人表示支持文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较好的使用部分学术词汇;句式灵活多变,再加强从句的使用会更棒;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
A lot of people attach great importance to enroll their children in various of art classes and courses,thinking that they could help their children more competitive than others thorough the educational life.However,whether parents should do that or not,the answers vary from person to person. Some people support,naturally,do exist.They believe that in addition to do well in school work,extracurricular-learning also should be formed and valued. Furthermore,by participating in those art training classes can not only improve individual quality,but also foster the ability to appreciate the beauty. Nevertheless,people who holds the oppsite opinion, believes that attending to art classes particularly those course are not well match with children's interest,can be badly damage their learning desire, which would lead to a consequence of lower efficiency. For me, I strongly assume that both the combination will be perfect.Teenagers should take their school work seriously and at the same time,keep frequent communication with their parents to choose the interesting art classes.
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