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句式变化较为明显，另外句法层面做的不错；文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket，if we can't make sure the basket is enough big ang egg is break hardly. In my views,the eggs as like a kind of changes,such as,work's change、studdy's change and so on.We should have a perfect plan to advioe the change lost in our life.In another words,different people have diferent character or habit,it is good idea to do suitable things fallowing thire style.What's more,we can't get right information what we should do or what we should't do certaintly at first time.In a word,it is necessery to put eggs in more baskets,making a bet maybe we can win! As far as I am concerned,it is very stupid to put all eggs in one basket.Look before you leap,making your decision seriously
