2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

有效的运用了一些复杂句；文中缺乏丰富的词汇表达，但词汇拼写要更加认真；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。

Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will Nowadays,erevry one want to be succeed,but not everyone is winner.Infact, the important is that not only work hard ,and also who must be have a strong will.we can appreance a lot of winner have a strong will and ability 。so,the learning is also like this ,not hard work you always become a failer .the nature give us everything that we must be use it to study ,no which person get through endeavor acquire succeed