作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;句式变化较为明显,另外句法层面做的不错;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket,if we can't make sure the basket is big enough ang egg break hardly. In my views,the eggs as like as a kind of changes,such as,work's change、study's change and so on.We should list a perfect plan that avoiding the change lose in our life.In another word,different people have different character or habit,it is good idea to do things according to their style.What's more,we can't get right information what we should do or what we shouldn't do certainly at first time.In a word,it is necessary to put eggs in more baskets,making a bet maybe we can win! As far as I am concerned,it is very stupid to put all eggs in one basket.you have to make your decision seriously