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句法方面做的很棒，加强复杂句的使用；文中词汇较灵活，但要注意积累学术词汇，拼写错误也要注意；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。
What is the greatest use of life? We always heard that phrase during the growing process but we don't know the real meaning of it.For example, we thought that go to school is useful for life,because we spent a lot of time to enhance our knowledge.Studying can exercise our brain and make us outgoing,social,laid-back.Additionally,in the school we can make friends with who have a lot of common in us. But when time goes by,we found that this life maybe not our look forward to.We should make our life better.We have a big ambitions, such as trabelling around the world to see the killer views that we can't feeling in the school.We should go out the prison,we need to find what we actully want.
