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Recently,university ranking has given a big heat on the perspectives that hold from all works.A growing number of people active in the discussion of high education.These, however,come down to the following aspects. People from well-paid industry hold the view that all issues in university should be eveluated by marks just like the grades we get from math test.So we can understand what range it is really stand.However other experts in the education industry are not likely to see the range of universities for every of them advacing in different aspects.And we cannot rank these reasons in use of similar eveluation. I have been suspecting if that kind of eveluation really work.As college students we are more likely to see the experts can spend more time on the eductional ways of teaching rather than set marks to universities.
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