学术词汇使用较丰富,拼写做的很棒;可增加文中从句的使用量;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;可以适当增加副词的使用。
In China,there's a saying that "The landscape of Guilin tops that of any other place under heaven." In light of this,I will recommend Guilin as the first destination of my foreign friend's trip to China. Guilin is a world famous tourist city, the first batch of national historical and cultural city, Chinese Chinese outstanding tourist city, the territory of the landscape be known to all the world, thousands of years to enjoy the "Guilin Scenery in the world" reputation. Guilin is located in the northeast of the Guangxi Zhuang Autonomous Region, Guangxi is second only to the largest city and the second big Nanning Airport, political, economic, cultural, transportation center in Northeast guangxi. Guilin north of Hunan, Guizhou, West, South and east to Liuzhou City, and adjacent to the Hezhou City, is a mountainous and hilly area, is a typical "Karst" over the city's limestone karst landform, after millions of years of weathering erosion, forming a ring Qian Feng Li, a water around the city, a unique landscape of stone cave of beauty. 双语对照