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中考考前作文集中训练附范文3:矛盾

发布时间:2014-05-29 17:38浏览次数:422
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根据中文大意和英文提示词语,写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的回信。信的开头和结尾已给出,其词数不计入所完成的回信内。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

假设你是Shirley。你的笔友李华和父母情有一点小矛盾,想要向你倾述。下面是他给你的电子邮件。请你根据他的邮件内容写一封回信,谈谈你对这件事的看法和理由,同时提出一些帮助他解决问题的建议。


Dear Shirley,
 Recently I had some trouble with my parents. Because the middle term examination is drawing near, they both pushed me to do my lessons and locked my computer. You see, I have kept a QQ pet on it that needs to be fed often. I feel very upset. Can you be kind enough to give me some suggestions?
                                                                Yours,
                                                                Li Hua
Dear Li Hua,
  I’m sorry to learn about your trouble.                                          
                                                                          
  I hope what I said can be of some help to you.
Yours,
Shirley
用户的作文(系统评分67.5分
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作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;可适当增加从句使用,注意极个别句子错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

Dear Li Hua, I’m sorry to learn about your trouble. I don’t think you need to be so upset, nor should you be unhappy with your parents. Don’t feel strange if I say your parents are right about the matter. As a teenager you should learn to take some responsibility about your own future. I think the most important thing you are doing now is to get prepared for the future by working better on your lessons. Computer is just a tool for both education and entertainment,while mid-term exam is an important stage to test your learning. So, I think, for the time being, you should put the exam before the QQ pet. I suggest you have a good talk with your parents and ask them to feed the QQ pet for you for a time. And your parents just want you to be the best, I hope you can talk with your parents about this. I hope what I said can be of some help to you. Yours, Shirley

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