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2011年专四作文真题:私家车是否应该交污染税

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:50浏览次数:11788
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题目 Should Private Car Owners Be Taxed For Pollution?
说明 Recently government agencies in some big cities have been studying the possibility of putting a “pollution tax” on private cars. The amount of private car owners would depend on the emission levels, i.e. engine or vehicle size. This has caused quite a stir among the public. Some regard it as an effective way to control of the number of cars and reduce pollution in the city. But others don’t think so. What’s your opinion? Should Private Car Owners Be Taxed For Pollution?
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1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
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文中词汇表达用的较灵活,同时能够较恰当地使用学术词汇;句法方面做的很棒,加强复杂句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。

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Riding a bicycle is preferable to driving a car. Firstly, as we know, riding a bicycle takes more exercise than driving a car. Riding a bicycle can effectively exercise and form a healthy habit. If you substitute riding for driving , it will result in some change that you became lazier and increase weight. Then, riding a bicycle is a clean, nice lifestyle which is healthy and harmony without pollution. Instead, car often release the harmful gases into the air and cause great damage to the environment. Finally, riding a bicycle is a good way to relax and suitable for everyone, because it spends less money that everyone can affort. But driving a car will cost much more money include purchase and maintenance. What a huge expense!

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