小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend. He is Xian Hua,He is a good boy.He frome Bei Jing,He have a big nose and he have a lot friend. Everyday we are go to school,but day he not .Where is he,he is in the home.He is in the home to do homework.This is my friend.What happy day.