2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Dear friend, I'm very happy to learn from you letter that you are going to visit my hometown. Thus,I'm pleasure to introduce some interestingplace to you. My hometown, the most interestingplace,which have beautiful landscapes,delicious foods and enthusiam peoples.Chongqing is my birthplace.There have many place that we can see.At first,we can going to Jiefangbei as our first place to visit.Because there have memory of people,and we can go shopping.Secondly,the next place is some musem that have historical membership.The end of all,delicious foods are very important cause you going. In a word,welcome to my hometown! Sincerely, you friend