2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Dear friend, I'm very happy to learn from you letter that you are going to visit my hometown. Thus,I'm pleasure to introduce some interesting place to you. My hometown, the most interesting place,which have beautiful landscapes,delicious foods and enthusiasm peoples.Chongqing is my birthplace.There are many place that we can see.At first,we going to Jiefangbei as our first place to visit.Because there have memory of people,and we can go shopping.Secondly,the next place is some museum that have historical membership.The end of all,delicious foods are very important you going to visit. In a word,welcome to my hometown! Sincerely, you friend.