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2010-2012全国中考英语试题汇编试题(35)写作:我的好朋友Li Lei

发布时间:2013-07-18 17:52浏览次数:1030
要求:

亲爱的的同学,你将初中毕业了。在这三年的学习生活中,你一定结交了许多的好朋友。请用英语写一篇短文,介绍一位你的好朋友Li Lei。


要点如下: 
1. 他乐于助人,性格外向,兴趣广泛;
2. 他成绩优秀,经常在学习上帮助我;
3. 我准备送他一个…以表达感谢;
4. 我对他的祝福和希望;

注意:

1. 词数80—100;开头已为你写好,但不计入总词数;

2. 短文需包括所有要点,不要逐词翻译,可适当加以细节或发挥,使其连贯、通顺,文中不得出现真实的人名、学校等相关信息。

3. 参考词汇:外向 outgoing


We are graduating from school soon. I miss so many good friends, especially my best friends ---- Li Lei.
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文章词汇表达比较灵活,学术词汇的使用要继续加强;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。

用户练习作文:

We are graduating from school soon. I miss so many good friends, especially my best friends ---- Li Lei. Li Lei is a top student. He is outgoing and hard-working. He has a lot of interests and is always ready to help others. We get on well with each other so we often discuss our study together and he can always find out new ways to help me work out problems. I’m so proud of him. I will buy a good present to him to thank for him.Because he always help me in the studying.It is a good way.And I hope he will have a bright future and that our friendship will last forever.Before leaving school, I’ll send him a card that I make myself with my best wishes.

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