小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文章词汇表达比较灵活，学术词汇的使用要继续加强；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

My good friend named Ping,She was a beautiful girl with long hair,clear eyes.I have making friends with her for twenty-three years.We come from the same place. She was my primary school classmate and middle school classmate,We was separated until we went to high school! Nobody can instead of her that who given me so much memories and happiness in my student-hood.I can not remember every thing that happened between us.But I can not forgot the day I saw her on the first time! When I was seven years old my father taken me to the primary school, I cried all the way.I did not like to go to school because my sister told me I would lose freedom,Suddently,I saw a girl with a smile face coming to me. She asked me why I was so sadly,After I told her the cause, She took my hands and said I would not be alone, She could make good friend with me!