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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36365
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用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
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My good friend named Ping,She was a beautiful girl with long hair,clear eyes.I have making friends with her for twenty-three years.We come from the same place. She was my primary school classmate and middle school classmate,We was separated until we went to high school! Nobody can instead of her that who given me so much memories and happiness in my student-hood.I can not remember every thing that happened between us.But I can not forgot the day the first time I saw her! When I was seven years old my father taken me to the primary school, I cried all the way.I did not like to go to school because my sister told me I would lose freedom,Suddently,I saw a girl with a smile face coming to me. She look like as old as me, And took a bag on her back, wore a dress, look very cute! She asked me why I was so sadly,After I told her the cause, She took my hands and said I would not be alone, She could make good friend with me! Very lucky, When we got to school we become to a classmate. From then on,We went to school together,And leave school together!We find we have so many the same hobbies and target!

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