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2010-2012全国中考英语试题汇编试题(13)写作:假期生活

发布时间:2013-07-04 17:39浏览次数:359
要求:

如今中学生的假期生活发生了很大变化。假定你是李明.美国的笔友Lisa想了解中国学生现在的假期生活。请写封回信。

要点如下:

学习和休闲仍然重要;
帮忙做家务或干农活;

参加社会活动.做志愿者工作.帮助他人。


注意:
1.词数80一100;
2.请结合实际增加细节.适当发挥;
3.信的开头和结尾已为你写好.不计入总词数。

参考词汇 : volunteer 志愿者


Dear Lisa.
 I'm glad to have received your letter. Our holiday life has changed a lot.
 Best wishes !
Yours.
 Li Ming
用户的作文(系统评分68.5分
评语:

作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

First,we keep on studying during the holidays.We have homework to do that can help us not to forget what we learned last term.Except that,we also join some activities or some skill training center to improve ourselves of some parts of skills. Second,amusement is a important thing too.We have much play time in holidays than in school.I usually play with my friend during the holidays.We like playing football,go hiking or climbing mountains together.Sometimes my parents take me to go to travel if they have the time.Third,when i at home i help my mother to do housework.I also want to be a volunteer to help people who are in need.In a word,our holiday life is a colorful life,i like it very much.

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