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如今中学生的假期生活发生了很大变化。假定你是李明.美国的笔友Lisa想了解中国学生现在的假期生活。请写封回信。
要点如下：
学习和休闲仍然重要；参加社会活动.做志愿者工作.帮助他人。
参考词汇 : volunteer 志愿者
文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用。
I'm glad to have received your letter. Our holiday life has changed a lot. Learning and relaxing are still very important to us. Besides, we often help our parents do housework or farm work. Through that, we realise how hard our parents work every day. And we can make a habit of laboring at the same time. Also, we take an active part in social activities as volunteers. Sometimes, we go to the streets to collect rubbish or go to the hospital to cheer up the sick children. We try our best to help people in need and make our hometown more beautiful. We find great pleasure in all these activities. Best wishes ! Yours, Li Ming
