2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(76):打工

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According to a recent survey,about 25 percent college students do odd jobs.And the number will increase to 72 percent when it comes to summer holidays.The odd jobs that college students do are tutors,waiters,shop assistants and so on. By doing these odd jobs,students can earn some money to pay a part of tuition which is increasing.The other reason why college students do odd jobs is that they want to be independent in economy,then they can buy something they like. In my opinion,it's quite good for college students to do odd jobs.By working,they can widen their outlooks,which will make a large difference in their lifes. They can also learn the way to communite with others as well as how hard to earn money,then they will be more careful when they spend money.