四川安岳县李家中学2012-2013学年八年级上学期半期试卷英语作文

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dear mary: hi,mary.i'm lucy.tell you a bad news!i could not go your barthday party,becase i have to do my english homework and go to the ef english school to learn about something like life hobby and daily english words.sorry.i will give you prasent to you.do not be so sad. hope the god protect you. I hope that you are consoled by this time. your bast friends lucy 2013 7 27