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文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；可适当增加复合句和从句的使用；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
Be A Smart Consumer Nowadays, many students collect all kinds of coupons, look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel and don't buy clothes unless in a sale. Maybe you will think it saves a lot of money, however, it doesn't make you a wise consumer. First, we buy something that is not in need. Students like collecting coupons to save their money during shopping, but sometimes student will buy a lot of goods just because of coupons. Sellers always set the minimum amount for the coupon and if you want to use the coupon, you will try to buy something you don't want to reach the amount. Second, clothes in sale is always out of fashion and ill-qulitied. Companies sell their clothes in a sale in order to clean up the old clothes and buy some new clothes that is in fashion. And some of factories will sell the ill-qulitied clothes. If students just see their prices, they will buy something bad and waste money. To be conclusion, we should learn to be a wise consumer and not just care about the prices. The most important thing is to buy what you are really want.
