2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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In the modern society,there is no doubt that computer and man can not seprate from each other.Wherever you are,in the office or at home,computer is here.For example,if you study,you will use the computer to search the material;if you work in the office,you will use it to type documents,therefore ,if you ask me,computer and man are the one.Do you agree?You think about you daily life or work time.However,there is something wrong because of the currency of computer.Man always stares at computer screen so that they ignore the people around them.