小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a friend,he name is Bob.I alway wanan play with him,and we stay all the day.he is tall,and he is handsome when he is smile.We have same hobby,we unusual play computer game in some internet bar,that so funny.But now,he leave me,I feel so along,we just talk on the phone.Sometime I wish he sday by my side.