2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Nowadays shopping online becomes more and more popular.Because you can buy goods that you want to buy but not go out.But one coin has two sides.So does it.There are a lot of shortcomings of shopping online. Different people have different views on shopping on the internet.Now let me explain my opinion on online shopping.On the one hand you can only see the picture of the goods which you want to get but you can't see the real thing.Maybe there are lots of problems.Such as the chromatic aberration,size.If you are not content with the goods,wanting to exchange or cancel the orders.It must be very complicated.One other hand there is a big risk on shopping online. That's all my views.On a word,my advice is shopping online properly.