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2013年2月2日雅思大作文真题TASK2

发布时间:2013-05-20 22:25浏览次数:831
要求:

Some people think it's all bad for children to watch TV, others believe watching TV can bring positive effects on children when they grow up, discuss both and give your own opinion. 

写作分析:

参考过去出现的相关题目可以帮助同学们更好地解题:
2008.01.10 TV/ video/ computer games: Good or bad
2008.05.10 Children watch tv: at home VS school
2009.05.16 Imagination and language skills: Read books Vs watch TV
2013.01.05 2009.05.16
2010.03.27 children more Tv, less activities, why? measures?
2010.09.25 Too much TV for children, How affect? What measures?
2010.11.04 Parents read for children Vs free choice on TV/internet/books
2007.12.15 Disasters & violence on TV: why, effects?
2007.11.17 Ads aimed at children should be banned?
第一段:看电视是孩子们很重要的课余活动,有些孩子甚至对电视成瘾
第二段:看电视太多的消极面
1对身体健康不利
2 减少和同龄人以及家人的互动与交流
3 对智力发展不利
4 有些电视内容不适合小孩子
第三段:适量有选择的看电视有益儿童发展
1 增加知识,和探索世界的兴趣
2 丰富课余生活
3 和父母或同龄人一起看有助于更好的亲子或朋友互动
第四段:适量地选择适合孩子的电视节目,并且尽量和父母或同龄人一同看电视有助于孩子的健康发展,否则电视将对孩子产生消极影响。
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作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;作者用词灵活多样,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间,同时请检查文章的单词拼写;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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there is no doubt that watching TV is now an essential part of our normal lives.Whether watching TV is bad for children's growth up or not,different people hold inconsistent opinions.In my point of view,we should balance this behaivor in a resonable method. It is worth to note that ocassionly watching TV does not only enrich children's life,but also faciliate them be familiar with the world.For example,watching animations might be the happinest time for children, especially getting off shcool and finishing a tedious learning day.At the same time,on one hand,some nature-exploring channels can help children learn the nature the other hand they can know what is going on in the world through some international channels,which are benefit for their health development. Of course we should keep it in mind that not all TV shows is approprint to watch for children,such as violent ones.Furthermore,the time limitation about watching TV shows is significant for chidren.If a child is too excessive on watching TV,he will lose the chance to communcate with parents or fellowships.This is apparently harmful for his psychological growth. In conclusion,if we could views the watching TV from a reasonable perspective and control the time length,I believe that children will benefit form it.

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