Some people think it's all bad for children to watch TV, others believe watching TV can bring positive effects on children when they grow up, discuss both and give your own opinion.
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there is no doubt that watching TV is now an essential part of our normal lives.Whether watching TV is bad for children's growth up or not,different people hold inconsistent opinions.In my point of view,we should balance this behaivor in a resonable method. It is worth to note that ocassionly watching TV does not only enrich children's life,but also faciliate them be familiar with the world.For example,watching animations might be the happinest time for children, especially getting off shcool and finishing a tedious learning day.At the same time,on one hand,some nature-exploring channels can help children learn the nature the other hand they can know what is going on in the world through some international channels,which are benefit for their health development. Of course we should keep it in mind that not all TV shows is approprint to watch for children,such as violent ones.Furthermore,the time limitation about watching TV shows is significant for chidren.If a child is too excessive on watching TV,he will lose the chance to communcate with parents or fellowships.This is apparently harmful for his psychological growth. In conclusion,if we could views the watching TV from a reasonable perspective and control the time length,I believe that children will benefit form it.