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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:46199
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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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From the table,we can know easily that people who receive higher education earn more money .the more education a people receive, the better job opportunity he would get. it is obvious that the people who have the high degree can find the job easily and is earn more money.what account for this is that the people who study better may be able to deal with the trouble in work that the people who have high school degree cannot tackle. however,there are exceptional case .if a people with high education only study from the book and do not put theory into practice ,he will be dismissed by his employee. in a word ,we should not only focus on learning from the book but also concentrate on practice .only the people who receive high education and is of ability can be paid well.

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