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题目要求：
Today，the quality of life in large cities is decreasing . What are the causes and solutions?
题目讲解：
报告类题目，难度不大，思路要点在于解决方法与原因分析的对应性。
第一段：开头
第二段：原因——环境污染，健康问题，工作压力
第三段：解决——绿色科技+绿化，健康意识+运动设施，学会自我减压
第四段：结尾
文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；作者在学术词汇方面还有很大的空间，还要注意单词拼写；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
Today ,the quality of life in large city is decreasing.There are so many healthy and psychical problems,such as the diabete,obesity ,heart stack and terrible cancer.All of the maters crash the life level down. Considering the reseans,it can be accured by the follow ways.The first one is environmental pollution.No matter the air pollution or water pollution ,they are all the first considering things when the disease break out .The second one is healthy problems,although the medical technology is boast but it can't fill the need of people also.So that the consequence is obevious.The last one is the press of work,you are a livehood of a family that you need more money to afford the fare of hole family,the only way you can do is that do more woek and considerless your own healthty problems. How can i sove these matters,here are some ways you can consider about it .The green technology ,low carbon life style and the more garden is necessary.The healthy diets,enough sleep time,more social charity,phyiscal equipment is important.The last one is depend on youself,you should learn to adapt the press and find a way pushing it out. I just want to say the life is awesome .
