2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(34):Describe this picture

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As the picture shows to us ,because the wood barrel was broken ,and the water cuold not be hold in it .From this we can know that the part is very importent.In our daily life we ought not to ignore the importance of the litter things.We also can take this thing into consideration.As a student ,we should be more careful.Sometimes, a small mistake even mkae our