初中英语命题作文真题演练(51):健康

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；可将文中的简单句转换为长句或者复杂句；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

In weekday，i eat bread and some eggs every morning，sometimes i drink a glass of milk。 I always eat a bowl of rice、Some beef、And some vegetables in lunch time，i always full at that time。 when i after school，i always eating some fruit，in supper，we eat noodles or dumplings。They are so delicious！ I think my hobby is healthy，but i think i should eat more vegetables and fruits。I wish i will have a healthy and strong body！