单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用,文章会更棒;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
In weekday,i eat bread and some eggs in every morning,sometimes i drink a glass of milk。 I always eat a bowl of rice、Some beef、And some vegetables in lunch time,i always full at that time。 I always drink a glass of water or milk,in supper,we always eat noodles or dumplings。They are so delicious! I think my hobby is healthy,but i think i should eat more vegetables and fruits。I wish i will have a healthy and strong body!