2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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My hometown is a young city named shenzhen where also is a lovely place.And here is a little idea for my friend who is gonna make here. SHENZHEN is a city be recovered for the beach and sea that's the reason why i like to show you my friend.DAMEISHA is the popular beach in shenzhen where is free for people to go.And