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作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意个别句子错误；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；副词使用偏多。
My view on online shopping As we knew, people's on online shopping are more and more popular.It even becomes a kind of fashion in people's daily life.To be sure,we buy goods online can bring us many conveniences.However it's also have many disadvantages. On the one hand,by goods online are very convenient,especially for these people who have no time to go shopping in real life.On the other hand,buy goods online usually cheapper than physical store.Moreover,there are diverse things online that you can choose. On the contrary,we may meet some questions when we buy goods online.Foremost,maybe things we received are consistent with the picture online.The second,sometimes the logistics are to slow to meet our needs.Last but not least,the online fraud is very dangerous. In my opinion,there are advantages and disadvantages of by goods online,we can choose according to our need.In ang case,we should very careful
