2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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MY HOMETOWN Welcome to my hometown--Jie Yan .it is a very beautiful city.There are many food to eat. peple in here is kind and hot . You can go to the Jie Yan bluding ,it difrent from others . In the cuntry ,you can breath the fresh air and go to fishing . anyways, i love my hometown .